Monday, April 7, 2014

Keywording

    Hello my name is Jeremy Soto and I will be discussing New York's response to Hurricane Sandy. I feel the way that New York City responded to Hurricane Sandy was very adequate because they kept many big corporations out of the rebuilding process.  In a chapter called "Blanking the Beach" from Naomi Klein's "The Shock Doctrine" she speaks about how private companies try to purchase different areas of disaster affected places, and potentially use them to turn a profit when she writes " At the time, many of the key privatization schemes had not yet gone through, including water and electricity"(Klein 74).  In that quote Klein is explaining how private companies were not able to get their hands on the electricity or water contracts in Sri Lanka to fulfill their plans to privatize that sector, thus giving us the idea of privatization schemes.  In terms of New York City's response to Sandy and how this idea of privatization schemes comes into play, I feel NYC avoided a lot of potential privatization schemes by not handing over our subway system and bridges to private companies in order to get quick, fast, and low to no cost relief after the storm.  If they would have signed contracts to these private companies there's no telling what we might have witness.  Potentially, we could have seen toll booths left in place as the relief efforts were done and the companies would at that point dictate how much it cost to cross that bridge and turn a profit off of it.  Perhaps even taking our subway system and repaired it while severely raising fares and putting people out of jobs because they want to make money and cut cost.  Some would argue that if the MTA was privately owned we would pay less in taxes since it would no longer be funded by the city,  but the potential damage that can cause to millions of peoples everyday lives would be dramatic.  Thankfully NYC took the relief into their own hands and avoided any privatization schemes that might have been out there waiting for it's chance to launch.

2 comments:

  1. Jeremy i love your ideas and your a very good critical thinker. Your keyword is very clear and i understand the definition of it. I couldn't have put it in better words then what you just wrote. i also believe NYC avoided a lot of privatization schemes by not handing projects over to private companies. Awesome writing :)

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  2. Hi Jeremy! Good Introduction. However, I think that it would be better that whenever you start writing a blog try adding statements like"My name is (state your name) and in this blog (state what you would like to discuss)". It would then look like this"(My name is Jeremy Soto, and in this blog I will be discussing New York's response to Hurricane Sandy)". You also did a great job with your thesis and critical thinking. You stated clearly your claim which is that "New York City responded to Hurricane Sandy was very adequate". Also you have come up with many great solutions like "If they would have signed contracts to private companies there's no telling what we might have witness". But try adding more suggestions. I like how you quoted Klein's idea from The Shock Doctrine which is "At the time, many of the key privatization schemes had not yet gone through, including water and electricity". It's good to hear that private companies did not have the chance to handle electricity and water contracts in Sri Lanka. It could have lead to privatization of sectors. However, in the end of your quotation I saw that you only put the the page number of the passage, which is "(74)".I would suggests that you put in the the author's last name plus the page number, which you already did. It would then look like this"(Klein,74)", or if you haven't stated the name of the book where you got the quote, you can also add it.(optional) It would then look like this"(Klein,TheShockDoctrine,74)" I saw that you were writing long sentences without using commas or periods, In the sentence where you write In a chapter called "Blanking the Beach" from Naomi Klein's "The Shock Doctrine" she speaks about how private companies try to purchase different areas of disaster affected places and potentially use them to turn a profit"when she writes " At the time, many of the key privatization schemes had not yet gone through, including water and electricity"(74)." I think that may be adding a period before "and" would be good since you are writing another long statement after it. Overall I think you did a great job. Keep up the good work! Hope my suggestions could help. :D

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